Living in big cities is bad for health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It's thought that there are many harmful effects on the health when residing in big cities. While I agree that it has some disadvantages, I believe that living in big cities still has benefits for people's health.
On the one hand, I accept that some factors can cause problems for people's health in the big cities. First, air pollution has some effects on the respiratory system. Some substances, and some dust particles in the air damage the lungs. Second, noise pollution is also harmful to individuals. Cars and buses travelling on the road make a lot of noise, which is harmful to both physical health and mental health. It has some bad influences on hearing and increases stress.
In contrast, residing in big cities has many conveniences. Although most big cities have a lot of pollution, there are a few cities that have little or no pollution like Chicago or Singapore. Because of the fact that have many hospitals, patients can get treatments on time in the big cities. In the hospital, modern medical equipment can increase the ability to cure disease. In addition, there are many gyms and sports centres in big cities. Individuals can improve their health through it. Moreover, If you are stressed and anxious, you can go to a psychological counselling place which small cities and countryside don't have a lot.
In conclusion, everything has 2 sides. Though some people think that living in big towns is injurious to health, I still believe that it has some advantages that I have mentioned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: Because
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90234375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71112605162 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52734375 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6626883626 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8235294118 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256305871465 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788147260796 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774487587882 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168241791257 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757594612579 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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