Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, there has been a growing debate that purchasing substances such as books, flight tickets and food on the internet became a trend. This essay will identify the benefits of shopping in this method to offset the negative effects.
To begin with the disadvantages of internet shopping, the most persuasive one is perhaps that purchasers cannot observe the quality of goods. This is because merchandisers upload only the basic photos of it. For example, many people who unsatisfied of their products used to require a refund due to the high level of their expectation.
Despite the disadvantages discussed above, there are a number of advantages arising out of online shopping as well. One of the most conspicuous advantages is that it is convenient. This is evidenced by the fact that customers today have busy life patterns and there is no time to go shopping. To illustrate, businessmen can enjoy shopping on the internet when they have a break time.
Another point often made by the proponents of this position is the online shopping saves time. This is because purchasers can compare the prices of products without visiting several shops. For example, it takes a few hours if we want to visit the shopping centre in Brisbane to Ipswich, but it takes just a few seconds if we want to surf several websites such as e-bay and amazon.
To sum up, it can be observed that there are both benefits and ill effects in relation to internet shopping. To choose which side I am on, I believe that advantages far surpass disadvantages, owing to the reasons discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, well, for example, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94423791822 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74393262738 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1686404526 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18157775638 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581468942413 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348782459896 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948500112433 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475623506769 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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