Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In our rapidly evolving world, every popular trend has a limited life span. People now a days find it easy to adapt to new trends, even they are eager to learn and try to utilize the scientific inventions wisely. The trend of purchasing things online had got a lot of attention recently. A wide variety of items can be bought online ranging from books, groceries, train and even air tickets. I believe that purchasing online has a plethora of benefits on comparison with their drawbacks.
Before the begining this new era of online shopping, traditional way of shopping was done in a shopping mall which sells all kinds of products in a single place. In a general population, women always found shopping as an enjoyable experience and even had shopping as a hobby. In contrast, most men felt shopping as a boring act. It is true indeed, shopping is time consuming and physically exhausting.
Few pioneers of online shopping, such as ebay, amazon and flipkart did something really spectacular by introducing new method of shopping and made shopping a pleasant experience to all. Few pros of purchasing things online are goods being delivered to our doorsteps, thousands of product in a single platform, convienent method of payment and eliminating the workload for buyers. Every invention has its own drawbacks, so does online shopping. They are uncertainty of delivery time, fraud of selling false products, damage of goods while transportation.
To conclude, Online shopping is a new trend and it is the most efficient way to buy products or to reserve tickets. Although it is being criticised for its disadvantages, it still holds plenty of positives for most buyers and I am very much convinced by the fact shopping on internet has enormous benefits that outweigh its drawbacks.
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 61
- Studying the English language in an English speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language Do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading people to buy their products Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it discuss both views and provide your opinion 89
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your a 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...r trend has a limited life span. People now a days find it easy to adapt to new trends, ev...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...end has a limited life span. People now a days find it easy to adapt to new trends, ev...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...raditional way of shopping was done in a shopping mall which sells all kinds of p...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, still, while, in contrast, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0303030303 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86331122448 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3445933096 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132100182275 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418051719579 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340062699605 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806830295584 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343286886931 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.