Can the Internet replace the classroom teacher? Discuss your views.
Nowadays, the question “whether it is possible to replace the Internet instead of the classroom teacher or not?” has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that online education is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that distance-learning plays a vital role in the world of science. First and foremost is that the students will be able to study at their own convenience, at any time, and anywhere. Secondly, it can be argued that those individuals who hold full-time jobs can choose their classes on schedules that allow them to continue working. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that they will complete their assignments at their own pace. A group of scientists, working at a prestigious university conducted that learning online is substantially beneficial for those international students who are not able to migrate overseas.
However, there is no doubt that learning online provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that those pupils who take the traditional courses have this opportunity to make a strong relationship with their teachers, not only during the course. but also after graduation to receive a recommendation, Moreover, tradition education promote their social activity and they have this opportunity to increase their interactions with peers. Also, immediate responding is the other issue because it does not require to send their questions and wait for the reply.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree with distance-learning so that some informed decision must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some seeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ssroom teacher or not?' has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...r teachers, not only during the course. but also after graduation to receive a reco...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: sending
...other issue because it does not require to send their questions and wait for the reply....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34219269103 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12182775713 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614617940199 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0986774646 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0619200204193 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0205337612705 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521283303451 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425919699989 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563903690319 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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