Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What are the causes of this ? What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
Beside oxygen and water, food is an essential need for every human being in order to survive. The request for more food is rising around the globe. The main causes must relate with the population growth and living standard, governments and communities should put a stop to food wasting and setting up more victuals supplies.
There are numerous causes can lead to craving for food like bad crops, natural disasters, etc. But in now a day world, the cause mostly from the population explode in many parts of the world. For instance, the population Asia and South America have rise considerably in the last 50 years, countries like China or India already past a billion citizens which is nearly equal the whole world population about 200 years ago. Our living standard also higher than ever before, food is now not so rare and precious like it used to be, leading to tons of food are being thrown away everyday. As our population is massive and most of us live in a modern society, most of us tend to wasting a huge amount of food without acknowledge food shortage will occur soon.
To avoid the worst situation happen, international community should raise people awareness about this serious issue in order to save what last, stop wasting can actually improve the situation. Moreover, governments should increase the action of food storage and create even more stable supplies. When the supply is enough for the whole population to rely on, we can finally eliminate the problem.
In conclusion, our rising population is the critical cause but huge amount of leftover are the real issue. By reduce the kitchen waste combine with create and maintain new supplies, we will soon overcome this problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91349480969 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43474232951 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5788567737 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262346710675 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905532305512 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484148013485 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151457223578 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736040785921 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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