Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What are the causes of this? What measures can
the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
The demand for sustenance is growing globally. This could be attributed to the rising world population and enhanced living standards. The purpose of this essay is to illustrate that problems occur throughout the world.
To begin with, the phenomenon of global population increasing also results in an increase in food consumption as more and more people consume food to sustain life. In addition, the standards of living in another country also improve. Many people may be drawn to more diverse foods such as premium beef or meat from rare animals. Therefore there are many food sources that have expanded the current range to sell in high quantities to people in need. This is necessary to maintain the current living standard.
For societies around the world to maintain sufficient levels of food supplies, there are several ways to control the supply of food. The government should make regulations to control the population. If population growth were kept to a minimum, food burden would be lighter. For example, the nation implements the birth balance policy.
In conclusion, the rising need for sustenance is caused by global population growth and residents' increased living standards. To satisfy this demand, international communities can establish various strategies including imposing laws to minimize birth rates and providing economic and technological assistance for the food production industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49315068493 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83963934958 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611872146119 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3503379231 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279242391319 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882254518311 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609646915402 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160853271301 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553320265023 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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