The car disastrous 20th century invention that has made the world's cities more dangerous and polluted, as well as being responsible for the death of millions of people in car accidents.
It is thought by some people that car has caused dangerous problem and polluted in majority cities in the world, moreover millions of humans were reported death by car accidents. In my point of view, I compeletly agree that the vehicle has poisoned air quality and caused traffic accidents.
The invention of car in the modern age brings drawnback to inhabitants around the world. The vehicle produces gas emissions and carbon monoxide which has a negative impact on the quality of clean and safety air, and these demerits might harm the layer of ozons. To be illustrated the fact, researchers and climate scientists reported the quality of air in Jakarta decrease significantly throughout the decades, which caused by a phenomenon in growing numbers of the private transportation such as car and motocycles.
I also pointed out the number of million deaths in traffic accident also influenced by the car. Nowadays, people tend to drive car as daily transportation, which it might emerges some issue such as road accidents. In the modern society, some people are driving car without being responsibilty of driving safety in the road. By those phenomenon, no doubt the car lead people to death. At the moment, in Indonesia only more than half of car drivers were reported experience mild accident and death.
In conclusion, the develompment of technology in car gives disadventageous to human’s lives. Where the car cause climate problem such as air pollution, global warming, decreasing in safety of driving and also growing the deathtolls in traffic accidents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this phenomenon' or 'those phenomena', 'those phenomenons'?
Suggestion: this phenomenon; those phenomena; those phenomenons
...bilty of driving safety in the road. By those phenomenon, no doubt the car lead people to death....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19291338583 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90777550893 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547244094488 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7895303078 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.916666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305423643878 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122410191873 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915017041082 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181327248297 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837962769753 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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