Some people think enviromental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your reason
It is considered by some people that enviromental-related issues should be solved together in international level, whereas others pressumed that it is good to put the problem as national matter. In my point of view, both measures are necessary to dealing with enviromental disasters, whether it is as international concern or the nation.
On the one hand, it is perceived by people that enviromental-related problems should be raised in an international level. The crisis, the reason behind this, bring negative impact to inhabitans around the world. In the recent enviromental phenomenon, plastic pollution in ocean has caused numbers of deaths of marine animals, which reduces source of food as the domino effect. Moreover, a rapid change in climate has given troublesome, such as a fast melting ice caps and harm thousands of people in europe due to high temperature in summer season. Hence, as the impact of critical enviromental issues, the international authority should be concern about the problem, which has been influenced numbers of living species around the globe.
On the other hand, the nation should concern about the enviromental issue that has occured in several places. The key point to securing country from crisis in natural problems is that the national authority might implement a well-established strategy. For example, in order to prevent drought and to supply source of water, Indonesian’s minister for public work and home settlements, has built numbers of dams in several regions around the country. And as the negative impact of flood in Jakarta, the goverment has enlarged the area of local river, in order to minimize the debit of flood.
To be conclude, dealing the critical enviromental-related phenomenon which could globally impact living species on earth, it requires international effort and strategy to prevent the problems in the future. Otherwise, the region authority take responsibilty to solve natural disaster which impact directly to the country and its people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 642, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concerned'?
Suggestion: concerned
..., the international authority should be concern about the problem, which has been influ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40317460317 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20169393311 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3556737828 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.923076923 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242950135511 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869184825167 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771880725512 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156961952153 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845261509263 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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