Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh disadvantages?
In the new landmark of this economic era, it is circumvented that nations are putting emphasis on economic growth than other fields to impose a substantial living standard for Peoples. Yet, the decision, subsequently, has run its course to have escalated the social predicament more severe and provocative than ever. From my perspective, it is not commendable to tell without reluctance that pros outweigh cons or vice versa, due to the exclusive benefits and endeavours it strikes to each factor being out of juxtaposition, as I will demonstrate as follow.
Acknowledging the fundamental relation, by pursuing the economic growth, though it can be insured that budgets are in sufficiency to distribute and mitigate other issues in other aspects such as transportation, education,... the social issues, however, seems mechanically to increase at some point. this can be deduced from that social issues are not eligible be constrained by recklessly handing out money to satisfy any philosophical parties. As social issues cropped up derived from the controversies of society and demand the jury of eloquent negotiation - an universal example. For a perceptive vision, the trending of Black lives matter in USA, brought about the rationale and chaos of protestors that authorities need to, not flaunt money to please them, but to impose satisfactory directives to compromise. Thus, money plays no role in this scenario.
To point out the advantages and disadvantages, the pursuit only paves the favourable pattern for affluent sectors. A nation of wealth and prosperity with high interest rate and prospects is a good bathtub for them to soak in. Moreover, that the monetary conditions, if provided, is stable can eliminate all of the uprising issues ans risks in majority of fields like security by equiping innovative nuclear weapoms or transportation by impending roads and traffics. Nevertheless, wether to be recognized as a honorable spot to accomadate, the social issues ought to be elaboratedly considered.
In conclusion, this political equivalance is not leading to a commemorating caucus. Both sectors bear the same vitality to the sustainable development of a nation, it is urged that authorities scale out the sectors in no impetuous manner and not placing favors on one than another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38227146814 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2041734045 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628808864266 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7617645114 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.533333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108426809885 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310864630626 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034991640601 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592096238693 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325450354285 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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