People have different views about whether ready-to-birth spouse should be taught to be good parents before they give births. Personally, I agree that mothers and fathers should take a course when they deceide to have a baby.
On the one hands, there's no doubt that parents are playing vital roles in child's growing. Lots of researches show that parents behaviour will greatly affect their children's personality and health. For instance, hard working fathers will possibly bring up diligent children. On the contrary, toxic parents will lead to miserable relationship between families and even contribute to their children's mental problems. Many children are suffering unhealthy parenting and seeking support from schools and society. If lessons can be offered for these parents, maybe there will be less mental health crises.
On the other hands, by taking a parenting course, couples also have an opportunity to see whether they're physically, financially, and mentally ready to become parents. If they can take parenting seriously, the education process will be more responsible and enjoyable. On the contrary, many young adults tumbled into the situation, which they're not ready and well-prepare for a new live, and living unhappy life.
In conclusion, I believe having parenting classes is necessary for every young adults who are longing to become parents.
- In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this How can people research this 61
- Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The charts below show the changes in ownership of the electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compari 78
- Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 78
- Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47169811321 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68917572377 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669811320755 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6964113361 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137269012798 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560040711424 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05283870866 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832503551991 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517220485172 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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