Celebrities receive constant attention from the media. Some people believe that the media should not publish stories about a celebrity’s private life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, with the development of technology, it is common for people to read some superstars’ news on the Internet. Whether social media should explore the personal news about the celebrities has caused a heated debate. I completely agree with the idea that media worker ought not to publish the stories about public figures’ private life.
There are several reasons why social media keen on issusing the personal stories about the public characters instead of the normal or international information. Firstly, media organizations can use famous people as tool to make huge profit. This is because this kinds of news can satisfied the fans curiosity about their idol’s daily life, which means that fans will buy this publication, improving the sale. Moreover, publishing public figures’ private life may increase the media such as magazines, newspapers or publications popularity. For example, if the media got the scandal about the public figures, it attracted people attention, which means that people focus on the news, meanwhile they will expect this publish workers can provide the up to date process so that they may follow this media.
I believe that mass media should not open well-known figure’s personal life. It is not fair for people in this job. Actors, singers, or atheletes just one kinds of the occupations. However, some media will publish stories about a celebrity’s private life, which making them exlpoited against their will. Therefore, it is simply unfair and immoral. Moreover, people’s privacy should be respected. People’s privacy allow people to develop relationship and make sensible decisions their private lives without being interfered with, which deserves to be respected and should remain private, regardless of whether they are celebrities or not. When a person gets divorced or face some diseases in his or her life, it is absolutely upsetting if the whole world can read about this in a magazine or newspaper.
In conclusion, my view is that media should not publish the personal stories about the famous person, and it is inequity and disrespected to use them to obtain benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... some superstars’ news on the Internet. Whether social media should explore the persona...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ol to make huge profit. This is because this kinds of news can satisfied the fans cu...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'fans'' or 'fan's'?
Suggestion: fans'; fan's
...se this kinds of news can satisfied the fans curiosity about their idol’s daily life...
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Line 3, column 790, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...to date process so that they may follow this media. I believe that mass media sho...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one kind', 'a kind', or simply 'kinds'?
Suggestion: one kind; a kind; kinds
...job. Actors, singers, or atheletes just one kinds of the occupations. However, some media...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3185840708 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74953155532 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53982300885 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9638222043 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.058823529 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348502382477 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117674977855 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813730615673 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233814891509 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636591278744 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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