As global trade increases, many goods, even some daily goods, are exported to another country, which includes long-distance transport during shipping. Do you think its benefits outweigh its drawbacks?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
As global trade is becoming an irreversible trend, more and more people are concerned about its pros and cons. Some believe that it boosts economic development; while other point out that it is not an economical model because shipping costs and tariffs will result in nothing but higher price of a product that consumers would have to pay, and fuel consumed during long-distance transportation will contaminate the environment. My view is that global trade bring us more good than harm.
Clearly, global trade has created enormous job opportunities for many countries. In this world, some countries’ economies depend heavily on exports, and in the meantime, other countries have to import raw materials or products such as oil, steel and food from their neighbours. So global trade benefits almost every country and allows the world economy to be stable and prosperous.
Moreover, thanks to global trade, various imported goods have improved overall living standards. For example, we are driving cats manufactured in Germany, watching movies produced by Hollywood, eating salmon imported from Japan, and wearing clothes made in China. We cannot imagine what life would be like without such goods.
It is also true that global trade has caused some problems. Of course, it may intensify commercial competition and long-distance shipping has negative impacts on the environment. But, even if we could ban international trade, these problems would still exist, because people may choose to travel abroad to purchase such products.
In summary, global trade offers a win-win situation for both importing and exporting countries. Meanwhile, I believe with the development of science and technology, we can eventually figure out some ways to offset the drawbacks it has caused.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in summary, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42446043165 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80324551086 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676258992806 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5579385474 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.714285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216773042622 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713812528834 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348786899955 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106663941472 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02917497094 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.