The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts show the reason of worldwide land recession in the three regions in 1990s.
It is noticeable that three regions with different proportions in the land degradation, the over-grazing occupy with the biggest percentage and European’s recession was the most serious part in the world. However, North America was the least in land degradation.
The pie chart illustrates the four kinds of the causes of the land degradation, including over-grazing, over-cultivation, deforestation and other. The over-grazing accounted for 35% which was the major reason lead to the land degradation. In addition, the deforestation was the second reason which held on 30% and the over-cultivation came after which occupy on 28%.
The table also shows the three regions of the world about land degradation. The Europe was the most seriousness part in land degraded because the percentage in total land degraded was the highest which was 23% and main caused by the deforestation. Next, the Oceania due to the over-grazing which account for 11.3% to be the second severity part which total land degraded in 13%. The North America was the fewest region in it and the total land degraded only occupy in 5%.
- Some countries spend a lot of money preparing competitors to take part in major competitions such as Olympic Games or football World Cup Some people say that it would be better to spend this money encouraging children to take up sports from a young age To 67
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- The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 the table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compare with 2015 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main f 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1990s'.
Suggestion: in the 1990s
...ide land recession in the three regions in 1990s. It is noticeable that three regions w...
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Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... In addition, the deforestation was the second reason which held on 30% and the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17435897436 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08764797536 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471794871795 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0391870951 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18211064466 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100410631173 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929200635007 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149183000632 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878755570495 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.