childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries.
Explain the main problem , and suggest some possible solutions.
It is true that in some countries, there are an increasing number of
obesity cases , especially in children. Though some people believe this
debated issue has come with other severse effects , there still exist
several solutions which can mitigate the consequences.
As the number of overweight is developing quickly lead to , several related
problems can be anticipated. Firstly , having bad effects on health ,
therefore obesity give a rise in a possibility of getting illness such as
heart diseases and respiratory problems. For instance ,one survey conducted
in America 2 years ago 85% of grade 5 students who weigh more than 60
kilograms experiences a risk of having diabetes. Secondly, child obesity
hard to do outdoor activities or playing sports. In other word, unfit and
unconfident in their appearance, leading to a lack of social relationship.
There are many solutions for the problems described above. The first
solution is for government should strictly restrain the contents of fast
food advertising. The second remedy would be that a responsibility of
parents to keep their children stay healthy one possible solution is to
control what children eat. Moreover , ensure that they have a healthy life
style such as taking them to do sports , do outdoor activities with them .
In conclusion , various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that
are certain to arise as having a big number of overweight children has
become a serious issue in some nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37130801688 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87897015705 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654008438819 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0018768293 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.083333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202296731753 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726267276984 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731110402751 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537773156563 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679383476778 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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