Children are experiencing the increasing educational, social and commercial pressures.
What are the causes? What measures do you think can be taken to reduce them?
It is true that children nowadays are burdened with academic and competitive requirements in society. Due to this, the general lifestyle of children is not as healthy as they were in the forefather, which is worrying development.
On the one hand, due to the rapidly broadening vistas of education, the expectations from a child to learn more and perform excellently are leading to them being overburdened and fatigued. There are certain select schools that make themselves out of bounds for students below a certain academic level. In fact, parents inflict high expectations upon their kids to get admitted to these over-hyped institutions. As a result, the children instead of utilizing their free time playing sports or nurturing a hobby, are constantly under the pressure of shining in their parent's eyes.
On the other hand, the achievements of children also become a topic to boast about in social circles. Instead of encouraging a healthy competitive environment and motivating their child to pursue the things of interest, they usually compare him with other's kids thus obligating him to prove himself better than the other. Some children do not realize they are under pressure and strive to excel in order to appreciate.
The solution to this rising and concerning problem is that first and foremost, parents should understand that they are not breeding the racehorses. In addition, every child has his own capability which needs to explored and strengthened. The educational institutions too need to ease up on the facade of expecting the outstanding result from every child and not overwhelm children with extra load of studies.
In conclusion, every child should be left to grow naturally in order to achieve the best out of him. Imposing pressure on children may make hamper their developt on a long run.
- Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 89
- As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur What are the problems that young people live in cities are caused by continued growth What solutions do you suggest 84
- Some people think that children should learn to compete, but other think that they should be taught to cooperate with others. What's your opinion? 84
- Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in the history in their country Why is this What can be done to increase young people s interest in famous people in the history of their country 89
- Children are experiencing the increasing educational social and commercial pressures What are the causes What measures do you think can be taken to reduce them 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 268, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to need'?
Suggestion: to need
...engthened. The educational institutions too need to ease up on the facade of expecting t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, then, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20945945946 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87176470232 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577702702703 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2097670214 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0756103778178 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276313697149 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247452260818 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427465201189 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014836025978 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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