Children are experiencing increasing educational, social, and commercial pressures. What is the cause? What measures do you think can be taken to reduce them.
Due to the rapid development of invisible life is put pressure on children’s shoulders with its culminating with the educational institutions, society. It is deliberate restrain freely time of children’s activities. From my perspective, the expectation is a cause of root in such a phenomenon.
There is no denying that without the competitive qualification that is credited in their status, hardly oneself expressed the condition of their career in the labour force. Thus, to resecure a golden ticket for these positions, a famous university is the appropriate destination for their decision. To accomplish that, sacrificing spare time that might be concentrated on their desires and attending tedious classes is not avoided. What is worse, parents are driving primarily factors to enroll in extra-curricular training, letting them coercion in covering family’s unprecedented expectation.
In other words, to alleviate the youngster’s stress, the understanding of study nature from the family towards their offspring is as concerned. Open communication in both parents and their children might be strategies effectively which could be phased out the obstacles are stretching to the inner of the youngster. Furthermore, instead of comparing the ability of one’s, parents are needed to nurture souls that they are comprehensive capabilities in reaching their final goal.
In conclusion, under inevitable pressure in competitive circumstances from the outer factors are urging people for the optimal performances. However, proper parental guidance is actually contributed accompany to complete their offspring purposes.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89029535865 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38968549807 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654008438819 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2356011907 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101417360977 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334078605227 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335892536044 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568923506265 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302086003869 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89029535865 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38968549807 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654008438819 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2356011907 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101417360977 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334078605227 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335892536044 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568923506265 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302086003869 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.