children are taught to push themselves to try and be better than their classmates, rather than work together for everyone's profit.do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
it is often argued by some that pupils should be encouraged to do everything for their benefit instead of other classmates' betterment. This would help people to be independent and more confident than their friends, whereas, the disadvantages would be prominent when compared to the other.
on the one hand, there are benefits which make successful in children carrier and future. Initially, students might have an opportunity to compete in exams and interviews if they are strictly taught about themselves and their bright future. Similarly, pupils who got pushed to do their work alone irrespective of their peer support often get the confidence to overcome their life difficulties to some extent. for example, pupils from self-centered schools often pass interviews in individual sections, and they are not access to help from others to pass.
on the other hand, students who grew up with others may show a higher caring and sympathetic attitude towards others. such behavior would always help them to succeed at any point with their discrimination. likewise, group activities may exhibit their sharing habits and would get a chance to explore the fruitfulness of interaction than selfishness. these attitudes help them to do social work and improve their connections which leads to wonderful future generations with peaceful and helping behavior. for instance, a pupil who got a chance to mingle and work for everyone would get sufficient knowledge from different persons and this ability to do everything in a proper manner.
in conclusion, self-centered learnings help people to do their things efficiently. however, this would be lower grade when compared to the advantages of care and work for others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is often argued by some that pupils sho...
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Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'classmates'' or 'classmate's'?
Suggestion: classmates'; classmate's
...hing for their benefit instead of other classmates betterment. This would help people to b...
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Suggestion: On
...rominent when compared to the other. on the one hand, there are benefits which ...
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Suggestion: For
...heir life difficulties to some extent. for example, pupils from self-centered scho...
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Suggestion: On
...access to help from others to pass. on the other hand, students who grew up wi...
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...nd sympathetic attitude towards others. such behavior would always help them to succ...
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Suggestion: Likewise
...at any point with their discrimination. likewise, group activities may exhibit their sha...
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Suggestion: These
...ulness of interaction than selfishness. these attitudes help them to do social work a...
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Suggestion: For
...ons with peaceful and helping behavior. for instance, a pupil who got a chance to m...
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Line 5, column 664, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rsons and this ability to do everything in a proper manner. in conclusion, self-centered learn...
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...o do everything in a proper manner. in conclusion, self-centered learnings hel...
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Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... people to do their things efficiently. however, this would be lower grade when compare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, may, similarly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33948339483 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90081027225 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3397114663 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234978977807 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812528330004 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478584131285 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150643979994 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304214809597 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is often argued by some that pupils sho...
^^
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'classmates'' or 'classmate's'?
Suggestion: classmates'; classmate's
...hing for their benefit instead of other classmates betterment. This would help people to b...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...rominent when compared to the other. on the one hand, there are benefits which ...
^^
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...heir life difficulties to some extent. for example, pupils from self-centered scho...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...access to help from others to pass. on the other hand, students who grew up wi...
^^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...nd sympathetic attitude towards others. such behavior would always help them to succ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Likewise
...at any point with their discrimination. likewise, group activities may exhibit their sha...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ulness of interaction than selfishness. these attitudes help them to do social work a...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ons with peaceful and helping behavior. for instance, a pupil who got a chance to m...
^^^
Line 5, column 664, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rsons and this ability to do everything in a proper manner. in conclusion, self-centered learn...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...o do everything in a proper manner. in conclusion, self-centered learnings hel...
^^
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... people to do their things efficiently. however, this would be lower grade when compare...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, may, similarly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33948339483 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90081027225 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3397114663 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234978977807 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812528330004 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478584131285 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150643979994 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304214809597 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.