Children should be listened.
Children living under the auspices of their families are often deemed too immature to make their own decisions. Adults’ disregard towards their opinions sparks tension between two generations. While some people take a dim view of youngsters’ choices, I believe that teenagers are grown-up enough to decide on their own. If the mature let things orbit like that, every generation can live happily and innovatively.
Youngsters can hold grudges towards their caregivers on account of not being respected and confined from doing things on their own. If parents coddle their children too much, it can render them dependent on their parents, paralyzed and bewildered by unexpected vicissitudes of life. For instance, in a conservative community like Asia, the zeitgeist there dictates that children opposing to their parents, even in steering their own life, are unfilial and impertinent, which only serves to drag down the development velocity of society and dampens the value of being young and fearless. An abundance of adolescents after accomplishing required tasks, namely attending the university their parents want, feels like a pathetic unsaddled horse having no clue what to do after being given a free rein. Their life then is rudderless, which can be a reason for their resentment towards their parents, worsening familial relationships.
Moreover, adults need to resign to the fact that children have their own belief systems. Were parents to listen to their kids, many revolutionary ideas would be emancipated. Greta Thunberg, an environment activist or the national heroine Vo Thi Sau set the finest examples that young people can contribute to drastically positive change in the world as long as they are listened. Furthermore, this can help bridge the generation chasm and improve children-parent relationships. This is manifested the most expressly in western cultures where kids are given more chances to voice their opinions.
In conclusion, the youth is the pillar of any country. Regardless of their age, it’s ignorant to entrench the idea that they are frivolous and turbulent. Adults need to listen, youngsters need to speak up, both will make progress for their community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41569767442 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88193721795 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636627906977 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.076104807 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.588235294 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138273893085 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484846976017 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494223541707 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838378408514 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447041745204 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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