Children should do organized activities in their free time while others believe children should be free to do what they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It has been a hard decision for parents since whether they should set organized activities for their children or leave them do whatever they want in their leisure time. While there are some benefits for children to do activities that are planned by adults, I would argue that they should be freely to do things they want in their free time.
there are two main reasons for children to do organized activities. Firstly, they will enhance children's mental and physical health. Exercises or entertainment operations that are planned before can make a logical time schedule for children. As a result, children can have a comprehensive development and reduce their time wasted considerably. Secondly, youngsters can stay away from toxic contents on the internet. In our modern world, younger generations can easily access the internet through smart devices such as smartphones and computers, and this can be a potential problem due to the fact that they can meet some negative information in some social media.
On the other hand, I believe that children should have the right to do their hobby in their leisure time. None of us want a childhood with no freedom as well as doing organized activities from the adults in our leisure time. this is not the way for youngsters to have a good period of their adolescence, and strict regulations can lead to some negative emotions in young generation's mind. Furthermore, children should be developed by their own way, by their own thinking and the way they explore the world by themselves. this can help young generations to have a creative mind and the ability of coping with problems in their future.
In conclusion, children should be freely to do activities that they want in their free time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97945205479 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71640761524 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513698630137 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4243571702 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436923273056 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184868701105 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169112909751 0.0667982634062 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.36355269395 0.151304729494 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161686401975 0.056905535591 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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