For the tim being, it is undeniable that tourism has been developing to become one of the most significant earning for a country. This following essay will show you the advantages and disadvantages of this argument.
The main benefit tourism brings to the nation is boost in country's economy due to increased spending in certain aspects. Tourists require service while travelling such as accommodation, guides, entertaining activities,etc. It helps local people to have opportunies to get jobs with high salary. Moreover, tourism assists the local to grab a chance to show itself off,raise its profile to the world and connect people around the world. To illustrate, the unity between people of different races, background and customs can be boosted and have a deeper insight into other countries' culture.
Beside such instrumental merits, there is a drawback that this trend can cause is environmental destruction. These days, the tourists tend to have an overconsumption of food, drink,etc. As a result of it, the attractions' visual will be ruined. Specifically, some well-known beaches or landscapes in Vietnam have been facing up to the waste that makes the water more polluted. Moreover, to meet tourists' demands, more and more forests are cut down to build ecotourism destinations.
Despite this mentioned drawback, it seems to me that tourism has made a more positive contribution to governmental income. If the government, local communites with travelers aware of maintaining the natural beauty and take actions to protect,we can solve this problem.
On balance, the fact that the boost of national revenue and image-promoting should to be developed more, while the spoil of natural environment must be deleted. Personally, the positive sides outweigh the negative one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40143369176 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08317070544 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637992831541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.114784368 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155751266911 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434891668652 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455827203806 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859239452891 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544522564375 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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