A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position
With the intensively increased human population, many companies have to build more factories to raise production to meet the huge demand. The phenomenon of establishing a factory near the people living area has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I disagree that make the distance too close between the factory and the community.
Of the reasons why the factory should build near the community, probably the most significant one is that this has lower production expenditure. Cost control is critical to a company for setting a lower price for the community, and shipping expenditure is a big part of the cost. A far distance means more salary for the employee and more fuel for the truck. So, the community gets a lower price with a closer distance to the factory. This factor in turn allows people to buy the products at a lower price, reducing the cost of necessities of life.
Although there are good arguments in favour of the company, I believe that there are more drawbacks than advantages. Most factories will release carbon dioxide gas into the air, causing air pollution that affects the health of people living in nearby communities. Moreover, some factories dump chemical waste into the river which contaminates the quality of the water provided to the community. Many people reported those factories are affecting their health over the world. As a result, building a factory near the community will make people concerned about their health. In as long turn, it may lead to a divergence between locals and companies.
Under this line of thinking, the lower amount for the communities is a strong argument. However, I still believe a healthy body and the image of the company to the public are more important. So, the company should not build a factory nearby the living area
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97756410256 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64080586277 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1726506101 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3529411765 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175675545728 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614662291991 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493842250041 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118500541733 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240503192807 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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