Compare and contrast two clothing fashions in two differant countries and explain which one you prefer and why

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Compare and contrast two clothing fashions in two differant countries and explain which one you prefer and why

Vietnam and China are two countries with ancient cultures in the world. Both countries are in Asia and have distinct cultural features such as costumes, rituals, and traditions. The traditional clothing of Vietnam and China, known respectively as Ao Dai and Cheongsam, is one specific element that is most well-known to everybody.
Ao Dai and Cheongsam have nearly identical meanings. These traditional costumes are considered effective ways of maintaining links with the past. These also play a vital role in linking people to their ancestors. People in Vietnam and China wear their traditional dress in festivals, parades, and religious occasions can help evoke many emotions in the hearts of people and give them a sense of belonging to their countries. In other words, since these customs have been worn for centuries, wearing them makes individuals proud and helps them remember their predecessors. Furthermore, the traditional dress of a country often reflects various aspects of the nation’s culture and rich heritage.
Besides that, there are also variances between these two traditional outfits. Particularly, Ao Dai, on the other hand, focuses on stylizing the part, but focuses on keeping the line, in contrast to the Cheongsam shirt, which tends to vary the slit part, the length of the flap, the embellishment accentuates the hem, neckline, button... Pull the lengthy, divided flap that is attached to the length of the hip and knee. Except for certain designers that prefer novelty and have a sleeveless design with a camisole, Ao Dai always has sleeves, whether short or long, whereas Cheongsam has sleeves or none.
Each country’s fashion has its own beauty, characteristics and is the national soul of that country. I am all into Vietnam’s traditional outfit due to its pure beauty; one undeniable fact is that Vietnamese people are always proud of their cultural features.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, except for, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30463576159 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85970816562 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9648624641 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114843877164 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387140179459 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439117959924 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073684066404 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432029515533 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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