The two maps show Kingston's University Hospital in 1990 and 2020
The two maps depict the innovation of Kingston’s University Hospital over the 30-year period, starting from 1990.
Overall, it is evident that Kingston’s University Hospital has witnessed significant changes since 1990. Over the period, the University Hospital was enlarged due to the disappearance of the Farmland.
Initially, the Farmland that stood in the North-East was replaced by the University Hospital used for inpatients. To the left of the Farmland, the old University Hospital was renovated and transformed into a building used for outpatients. By 2020, the old Parking in the middle was completely renovated to be larger.
During the period, the old Entrance was expanded by constructing the Ambulance Entrance and transformed into ( converted into ) the larger Public Entrance, which was linked to three roundabouts around it. The new Entrance used for Ambulance service directly led to the outpatient building. The Nessan’s Road running from the West to the East under Kingston’s University Hospital building was remained during that time.
- The two maps show Kingston s University Hospital in 1990 and 2020 47
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s 73
- Compare and contrast two clothing fashions in two differant countries and explain which one you prefer and why 95
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65625 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03993600878 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8998567332 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.555555556 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.222222222222 5.23603664747 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30561989221 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142701563676 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125320789259 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228352103379 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129860032355 0.0819641961636 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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