Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competition affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?
Competitiveness is often regarded as a positive personality trait in many societies. From my perspective, being competitive exerts both beneficial and harmful impacts on our lives in different situations.
Those with a competitive nature are more eager to achieve their professional and personal objectives. They are easily envious of other people’s accomplishments, which then nudge them towards growing and striving endlessly to surpass others. This, therefore, serves as a catalyst for career advancement and personal growth. An example of this tendency can clearly be seen in school, where students are, most of the time, pushing themselves to the limit by studying and cramming endlessly every day just to exceed their peers.
A person who competes fiercely is frequently viewed as conceited and haughty. When a disagreement arises, their relationships with those around them, especially those with romantic partners or relatives, usually deteriorate because they are unwilling to make concessions. Furthermore, a highly competitive workforce that produces an intense degree of competition within the organization can also lead to a toxic work environment. In addition to not encouraging productivity, this kind of atmosphere makes some employees uncomfortable collaborating with one another and may even push them into quitting the company in search of a better place to work.
In conclusion, I believe that competitiveness can be considered both positive and negative. It can sabotage a person’s relationship with people around them and affect the workplace. However, it can encourage people to work harder towards their desired goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71544715447 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2680196464 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69512195122 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5496881689 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170767172333 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657000641007 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631944067054 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115663932903 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510905301353 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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