Some people argue that spending a lot of money on wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is a waste of money; however, others believe that it is important for individuals and for society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today’s society, the scale and expense of celebrations, ranging from weddings to birthdays, have increased significantly. Some believe that splurging on these events is nothing more than an unwise expenditure, while others argue that these celebrations have pivotal importance both personally and socially. This essay will first closely examine both views before showing my final thoughts.
On the one hand, opponents of extravagant spending on celebrations often highlight the financial burden it places. Weddings, for example, can cost the equivalent of a year’s salary or more, plunging many newlyweds in debt at the very outset of their marital journey. Similarly, birthday parties, with their rising demand for unique themes, venues, and gifts, also drain the pocket. Critics of these events often argue that this money could be invested in more enduring ventures, like purchasing a home, higher education or even savings for unforeseen hardships, providing long-term security rather than ephemeral pleasure.
On the other hand, proponents of extravagant celebrations often emphasize their important role in individual and societal wellbeing. On the individual level, they mark life’s milestones. For example, a wedding is not just a mere celebration; it is a public affirmation of a couple’s love and commitment. By the same token, birthday parties, particularly for children, play an important role in shaping their self-esteem and understanding of social dynamics. The joy, memories, and bonding that such occasions foster cannot be quantified in monetary terms. On the societal level, these events can promote social cohesion. Celebrations are often grounds for reunions, rekindling relationships and reinforcing social bonds.
In light of the aforementioned considerations, I believe it would be prudent to approach celebration spending with moderation. While recognizing the psychological and social importance of these events, individuals should be encouraged to live within their means, prioritizing their financial health. This approach can ensure that these celebrations benefit both individuals and the broader community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, similarly, so, well, while, for example, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88817891374 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11880330097 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626198083067 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3111052496 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.411764706 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233077297679 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653335095829 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409902630246 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131735310445 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209566321153 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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