Some people say that modern technology has made shopping easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Technology advances have undoubtedly revolutionized many aspects of our lives, with many advocating that the shopping process is more straightforward. However, others believe otherwise. In this essay, I will first closely examine both viewpoints before concluding that I agree with the former.
Granted, proponents may argue that the quality of goods purchased online will not be guaranteed. This is predicated on the assumption that buyers, opting for online shopping tools, cannot check the product in-person to see if it is good or not. They might just base on the picture and description provided by the sellers and then decide to buy it, potentially leading to an unsatisfactory shopping experience. However, this perspective overlooks the fact that certain regulations imposed by these tools have allowed people to return what they have just purchased and recoup money. This renders the previously mentioned worry almost unnecessary.
The argument in favor of virtual shopping is further strengthened by its convenience offered to buyers. Instead of spending time going to the malls or supermarkets, now simply with a click of a button, people can order almost anything they desire. This manifests itself in the fact that more and more people have decided to buy things faraway. Aside from this, state-of-the-art online market platforms also provide people with special sale occasions, countless vouchers, and free-shipping codes, which can help save a huge amount of money compared to traditional shopping methods. Admittedly, one may cite long delivery time as one of the drawbacks, engendering impatience and angriness. This, however, can be somewhat tackled by the increasingly improved delivery system, enabling orders to arrive as soon as possible.
In conclusion, while both perspectives hold merit, I would contend that online shopping does more good than harm, given the fact that it has made our shopping experience faster, more convenient and helped us save a considerable amount of money spent on purchasing things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49363057325 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98733074763 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.082766805 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107711187473 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332373155403 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284429796308 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721380032057 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271779549064 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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