Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?
Being competitive is considered to be of high importance by many societies. While there are a number of implications of this trait to individuals, I believe that it is a positive trend.
The principal impact of competitiveness on individuals can be seen in their increased motivation to excel. At schools, ranging from primary to high, for instance, students constantly compete with one another in regional, national and international subject competitions. If they win, they will improve their reputation, have privileges, like scholarships, and represent their country globally, which will give them not only a sense of pride but also satisfaction. Conversely, in other aspects of our lives, competing individuals tend to be viewed as selfish. Colleagues competing with one another to land a higher position in their company, university students sitting their final exams, or applicants to universities who are taking their admission exams could be clear cases in point. This is where these people would be showing their ego.
In my view, competition is a crucial element of our society. What would happen if we had no competition in the society at all? It can be predicted that the quality of the services and goods will decrease. This is because of the fact that monopoly in markets will prevail and lead to an uncontrollable market in the society. Looking at other aspects of our life, people will lose their inner drive to accomplish important goals in areas, such as education, healthcare, economics, politics and engineering. In effect, competition-free lifestyle will perhaps be a trigger of social collapse, in the long term. It is, therefore, suggested that competition be encouraged in the society.
Overall, there are both positive and negative sides of one adopting a competitive personality, yet I strongly feel that this is a positive development in the society for without it we may face disastrous consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...rvices and goods will decrease. This is because of the fact that monopoly in markets will prevail and le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2987012987 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18491103326 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6303368226 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226671741729 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751171850148 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648001275165 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161433852259 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680850514725 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.