Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, nowadays people think that experiences and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss and give your opinion.
It is considered that having a university degree is the key to securing a desirable job. However, some people argue that having experiences and acquiring soft skills is more essential. In my opinion, having universities graduation is better for academic and professional jobs while gaining experiences and soft skills is more useful and flexible in some areas.
To begin with, it is thought by some people that have finished university studies will create the better opportunity to have an excellent job. In the other words, students choose to attend higher programs like master’s or Ph.D., as they think it will give them many advantages as well as high quality and better learning services. Moreover, to be accepted in some critical and positions, a degree with a high GPA is essential.
On the other hand, some people believe that possessing experiences and soft skills, such as communication, time management, or leadership is more vital in seeking a job. This is true with some specific jobs which require a certain or relevant background to be accepted in these positions such as sales or marketing. In addition, some companies require candidates to take personality or problem-solving exams to test their personal attributes. Therefore, candidates with strong soft skills are in high demand for some specific types of jobs.
Finally, in my opinion, whether someone has a high degree or massive training of skills, it depends on the difference of professional nature. For example, to involve in some industries like medicine or education, a high level of knowledge is fundamental with many theoretical and intellectual aspects. In contrast, public speaking or inspiring is critical for managerial or consultant jobs.
In conclusion, having advanced knowledge or experience are both crucial depending on what career people are willing to take. Thus, people should focus more on the profession they want to do and develop the skills that it requires.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome companies require candidates to take personality or problem-solving exams to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27795527157 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97327218008 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536741214058 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7484690058 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.133333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8666666667 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285569832192 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957077180213 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724791787601 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151649917588 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759650720449 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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