Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible on scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
In the developed modern world, information is essential to reach some scientific achievement. While some people argue that by spreading more valuable knowledge among all humanity, society will gain more benefits, I hold the opinion that some important and priceless pieces of information should not be shared without any fee or permission.
On the one hand, in the perspective of people who support the sharing of science, business, and academic world-related information. Firstly, as an individual, free access to academic knowledge can help them in the study and work aspect. Especially, for final year students and fresh graduates, access to the information about the successful businesses man and women will get them to learn the experiences and the direction whether they want to start up and become an entrepreneur. Moreover, approach valuable information in important fields such as medicine without any fee can help many scientists who don’t have financial background continue their research progress. For instance, good doctors and scholars can invent a medicine that can cure cancer - a serious disease for which there is currently no cure currently when they access free information on the Internet.
On the other hand, I agree with the statement that access to crucial and valuable information should be charged. The initial reason that some pieces of knowledge are priceless is that they are discovered after an endless effort and hard work of an individual or even a team. Charging a fee not only enhances the responsibility of the users but also shows their gratitude for the scientist’s contribution. Moreover, some secret data related to the nuclear or weapon industry can not be shared at any price. If those pieces of information are leaked, many terrorists can use them illegally, then, bring many dangerous and negative consequences all over the world.
In conclusion, some people are interested in sharing academic knowledge freely, I strongly believe that some information should not be shared because of its importance and value.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'businesses'' or 'business's'?
Suggestion: businesses'; business's
...to the information about the successful businesses man and women will get them to learn th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34461538462 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9426708283 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563076923077 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6177101423 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.615384615 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346535974751 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121663143819 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106755694622 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251740456175 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108251644806 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.