Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more imporant. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Graduating college is considered the most usual way to look for great careers in the future by some folks. In contrast, other people suppose solf skills and experience are much more important. In my opinion, the later statement is totally on point and and needed to spread to the wide audience.
The first thing I want to mention is the fact that most college graduates in this day and age lack general skills to survive in the workplace, especially comunicating and problem solving abilities. for example, messing up or stumbling words when dealing with customers after receiveing oders from their direct managers are quite common in this case. And without experience to back up, there is high chance they do not know how to handle issues which is also leading to the dropping point in working performances. Therefore, only the university cerfiticate is not going to save them the day.
The second significant factor is that not having any experience straight out from their schools is wholeheartedly off for many companies when all the job discriptions nowadays require a mimimum time of working somewhere, wherther it is part time or full time job. So if the resumes of potential candidates involve only the ''paper'' which is proved that you are not appeal enough to the interviewers then get ready to face the reality of being jobless, not even mention the good high paying job that everyone is despersately looking for no matter how qualify they are in terms of skills and experience.
The last thing is to check the unemployment rate anually, it is only increasing day by day when students tend to be more well-educated compared to previous generations. Does it not bring a question?
To sum up, college is not the ultimately trump card to get job that makes six figures. In fact, it can be rendered worthless now when the whole college stuff is just merely business at this point. There are thounsand of students graduating each year and looking at the number of unemployments can lead us to bigger picture.
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- Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more imporant Discuss both sides and give your opinion 89
- Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more imporant Discuss both sides and give your opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...the later statement is totally on point and and needed to spread to the wide audience. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...nicating and problem solving abilities. for example, messing up or stumbling words ...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...me of working somewhere, wherther it is part time or full time job. So if the resumes of ...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... somewhere, wherther it is part time or full time job. So if the resumes of potential can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in contrast, in fact, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88372093023 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72631647362 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607558139535 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1757866226 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154740353607 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047566736615 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523238580862 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800405458516 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456602318711 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.