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Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue this is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion

In today's digital age , technology has brought in tremendous growth in students lives.There are two predominatly contracting views are being debated in society. Some citizens are believing that the computers used for schooling are positive behaviour the other portion of citizens says that it has negative impacts . This essay will discuss both the views and i will provide my opinion wioth a logical conclusion.

On the one hand , the computer is one of the best inventions of technological advancements in recent past years . computers have given greater flexibility for a student in accessing the information over the internet and it in a digital format and read it as and when needed . furthermore ,they are also indirectly helping nature by reducing the paper usage which needs the destruction of tress . in addition online education through cumputers avoids the student's commute .which eventually helps them reduce their finacial burdens. For instance, during the recent Covid-19, all the students can't attend classes and complete their academic year.In short, there are numerous positive sides in schooling because of due to their ease of use.

On the other hand, there are some dermits in using computers in teaching and studying. To be precis, longer screen ime to attend onlie classes will bring in health issues like eyesight and obesity .Moreover, computer along with internet usage can be misused by children to watch unwanted content. As a result , there is a chance of increase in criminal activities and unusual behaviour . to sum up, computer usage in education has controllable negative impacts like health issues and addiction to bad content.
In conclusion, although a portion of people believes the negative impacts of laptops usage in education, I completely agree with the other part of soceity for varios benefits of them.Good parenting with proper monitoring by limiting computer usage can offer greater advantages to the younger generation.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36893203883 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80483686387 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598705501618 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7452629338 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.615384615 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201953892627 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678192958026 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623253534874 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12165850902 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802759275754 0.056905535591 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments