In this mordern world , the internet becomes the mosst essential tool for lives , especially, it benefits our future education enormously . Therefore, I totally dissagree wwith the statement that time spent studying on the internet is time waste.
First of all , it can't be denied that studying on the Internet is effecient and interactive . The internet provides students with a wide range of online resources . It helps us review old lesson and offers us extra-knowledge. Futhermore, internet is also a powerful tool in education. this tool will be able to make our lessons more graphic. it is one way of supporting students ' study and helping them be relax during the lessons . From that, students study without stress and pay more attention in classes.
secondly, studying online sets up self-studying skills. with high techonology, internet becomes abundant sources of information with students. this source is not limited as the knowledge at school . it assists students with updating knowledge . In addition, it is so flexible that students can studying everytime and everywhere. They can choose some online courses which are suitable for their free time. Not only that, these days, there are many apps designed with a view to improving students' self-studying . Since studying by apps and videos are more attractive, children can study harder and better.
All things considered , studying on the Internet provides us so many benefits . Moreover, students had better combine studying hard at school and self-studying online.
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue this is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 61
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 56
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 56
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39075630252 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90522563668 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605042016807 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3284472543 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.5263157895 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5263157895 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230012444946 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748663282391 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674552793434 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15897771163 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490911969814 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.09 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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