Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
After the generation X, there are countless products that change the world surprisingly. However, some people assume that computers are the indispensable invention, which creates the brand-new word dramatically, in the last century. Personally, I partially agree with this statement.
On the one hand, I agree that computers have become a vital part of people’s lives. In actual fact, thanks to this product, life is far easier. Firstly, computers help us to storage lots of information that we are not able to memorize all of them. Secondly, it creates opportunities to not only solve the math riddles or the calculation in our jobs but also many issues in jobs. For instance, Excel and Pascal are willing to solve all kinds of complex calculation for us, if we give the input number and equations, they will give us the result with high accuracy just by a click of the mouse. Word helps us in typing and formatting the form. Last but not least, modern computers allow you to entertain, relax in different ways like playing games, surfing the web, etc.
On the other hand, I disagree with the mentioned statement. I personally think that some gadgets are also useful and playing incredible roles in society. Television will be the first example. Thanks to this invention, people can catch up with the latest news, keep themselves updated and entertain in their free time by watching films or plays. Telephones, smartphones and mobile phones are very crucial and essential in our lives as well. These inventions, which invented in generation X and recent years, allow us to communicate to our relations and acquaintances with a long distance and it helps us overcome the geographic barrier. Finally, Internet is very necessary to daily life. We can surf web, chatting with friends, etc. thanks to Internet. Furthermore, it provides us with a variety of materials for free and gives many solutions to handle problems by a click of the mouse.
In summary, some people think that computers are the most important invention in the last century. I strongly believe that there are many other devices which are considered changing and making the world much more convenient and modernized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
...a vital part of people's lives. In actual fact, thanks to this product, life is far ea...
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Line 4, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld much more convenient and modernized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03305785124 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78519344969 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3010769975 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0454545455 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166003323155 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456954534064 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506300836963 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102451332523 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00477782334141 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.