It is believed that computers are the most significant invention of the last century. In my point of view, although computers have played an important role in the world's civilization, it is unilateral to admit this assumption due to the existence of other major inventions.
To begin with, the information machine's existence has brought automation generation. By using the algorithm, computers have automated devices to support human's indispensable demands such as entertainment, relaxation, education, ...etc. For instance, virtual assistants are helping us in driving, cooking, calculating, ...etc. In addition to this, computers show superior in multitasking, this is not only highly supportive but also reduces the number of works instead of family. For example, the driver can concentrate on working while artificial intelligence is driving the car.
On the other hand, there are numerous other inventions which had changed the world. As can be seen in recent years is the vaccine. It is the most potential to deal with Covis-19. Without vaccine's support, the world can not survive. Another worth-mentioning creation is nanotechnology. For instance, by using nanoparticles in curing cancer, doctors can find out how to stop the tumor's development. In the nearby future, nanotechnology is admitted to influence many science fields.
In conclusion, the computer's role in the world's advancement is undeniable, as can be seen in its contribution. On the other side, it can not be asserted as the most important invention for the twenty-oneth century due to other creation significant existence which has boosted our society's civilization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...rs have played an important role in the worlds civilization, it is unilateral to admit...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...inventions which had changed the world. As can be seen in recent years is the vacc...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tumors'' or 'tumor's'?
Suggestion: tumors'; tumor's
...r, doctors can find out how to stop the tumors development. In the nearby future, nano...
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Line 4, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
...any science fields. In conclusion, the computers role in the worlds advancement is unden...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...n conclusion, the computers role in the worlds advancement is undeniable, as can be se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54581673307 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29833320339 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2737765572 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145380422685 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466813163412 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404389208049 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935122242916 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226242353702 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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