Computers have been widely used in our daily life. How important is the computer in the development of modern society?
we are now living in the world where computer science become an integral part in our lives. although it has come in widely use and take part in various of social activities which greatly promoted the development of our countries. however, it is undeniable that computer also has its own negative influences on human beings.
The computer, as we already know, is a powerful instrument of calculation that allow scientists to do special research that cannot be done in the past. computers also allow people to solve mathematic problems in a short time which would take many years to deal without the help of computer science. In addition, computer has made a significant contribution in most of the scientific works nowadays such as bacteria research or space travelling as well.
however, it is true that computer is not exist without any problems. one of the most dangerous things about computer is that it can be manipulated by hackers to steal users personal information through internet or many others crime such as cyber bully and online stalking. it also lead to the increasing of the unemployed rate by replacing human whose jobs could be done faster and more efficient by using computer.
In conclusion, although computer is one of the most brilliant invention of human and it will further benefit the world in the future, and hopefully through computer we can create a better and nicer world soon.
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- Computers have been widely used in our daily life How important is the computer in the development of modern society 56
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- Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than others sources such as internet and tv to what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...moted the development of our countries. however, it is undeniable that computer also ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99578059072 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70448665606 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4259139224 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218726108126 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853072651981 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435754024251 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131506049997 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463015581097 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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