Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than others sources such as internet and tv. to what extent do you agree or disagree.
In the mordern society, internet become an integral part of daily lives which makes no surprise that many students use internet in order to learn and discover new things. however, the number of students who benefit from the internet or television is insufficient as many of them used to looking for help from their teachers instead of making research online. Although I think that the internet and TV are usefull sources of information but it is undeniedable that teachers are far more efficient in educating students.
it is true that internet provide us unlimited usefull information from which we can profit extensively. however, because of the enormous quantity of information so that we cannot firgure out one is right or wrong and consequently, teachers are much accurate since they were learnt and got a specific degree in teaching through many stages of testing. In addition, numerous of educative programme are telecasted but students fail to understand those topics which they can only perceive with helps from their tutors.
The fact that teachers can encourage students to achieve good score and learn to compete with each others which can not be implemented by computers. Furthermore, students would concentrate in learning easier because of the pressure which would be given by their tutors in form of fine. teachers can also create students interest in studying by using different measures of teaching which allow them to learn the lesson with willingness.
In conclusion, though television and internet is helpful for students in learning lessons. however, teachers can help students understand the topics easier and make them interested in schooling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32706766917 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75919617787 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0525055513 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.818181818 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234480294966 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992236385708 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490729162498 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144626095032 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510713780998 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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