Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
As recent development of the Internet or the online services in specific people are allowed to buy the necessaries online without going out ,as a result, more and more people prefer shopping online to offline shopping. In my point of view, I firmly believe that the benefits of this would outweigh its drawbacks.
On the one hand, shopping online surely have some unavoidable problems which have to be solved. Initially, people who buy things online would not be allowed to check the products they want to buy, therefore, it is hard to determine the quality of the products. As a result, people can easily be fraud by the sellers and this is definitely a waste of money. Moreover, the delay in delivery process is also annoying for shoppers when they have to wait for days to get their products in real live instead of buying them from the store to get it immediately.
On the other hand, online shopping can be extremely beneficial in some cases, especially for those who do not have much time for offline shopping. First, this way of shopping have more choices for people when they decide to buy something since the same kind of products would have different prices between the shops, thus, people would have a better decision when buying things after taking the prices, quality and models into consideration. Online shopping also allow people to buy foreign products which is not sold in native store with just one click of mouse.
In conclusion, although buying things on the Internet exerts some adverse aspects, the advantages can justify these.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the necessaries online without going out ,as a result, more and more people prefer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89056603774 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46228656102 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543396226415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.389822888 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.6 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190841152016 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773910063121 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473487327844 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132983863974 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377589711493 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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