Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
It is without surprise to hear that many people are receiving lots of advertisements nowadays. I strongly believe that, regardless of their consent, people are being heavily influenced by advertisements, and it is a pressing need to implement governmental action to limit any unauthorized promotions.
Regardless of affordability and necessity, being convinced by the promotions through different media platforms, consumers’ demands are heavily influenced these days. Advertisements not only make consumers want to buy goods but also make them feel regretful if they do not want to purchase. As a result, they eventually become frequent buyers and end up buying things that they even cannot afford. Furthermore, over-advertisement also breaches consumers’ own discretion and privacy. They receive a lot of push advertisements from different media and farms, which the consumers did not consent for. The advertisers are breaking into the potential buyers’ privacy defense and sending relentless push notifications. Thus, the people are coerced in terms of both freedom of choice and privacy.
However, there are governments that can take required measures that could help to protect consumers. For example, the government could enact laws to prohibit companies from sending advertisements through email and instant messengers if they do not receive consent from consumers. In addition, social media platforms can provide a turn-off advertisement option for consumers to choose from. This not only provides a better customer experience but also avoids sending restricts advertisements to consumers who are not targeted.
In conclusion, people’s purchase decision is highly influenced by promotions. However, as most of these advertisements are unauthorized push notifications, it is important to have a proper law to restrict their privacy-breaching behaviors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86446886447 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42737761377 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2119455134 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265046741275 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863562060928 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052917695046 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141056209899 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075810018141 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.