“Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?”
Many customers in the world are being affected by overwhelming business promotions. This essay will discuss if business promotions have an impact on people and suggest some measures that can be taken into account to protect customers from commercials.
Admittedly, advertisements have attracted customers to buy things that they rarely use. This can be explained that the dense appearance of advertisements which contain myriad catchy images and confusing slogans has lured customers to buy products even though they never use them. Furthermore, the exaggerated effects make products more useful in the eyes of buyers than they actually are. As a result, consumers are trapped by these tricks with ease leading to arbitrary decision-making.
Regarding the solution of this problems, the censorship and limits on market platforms have lessened the influence of advertising on customers. Due to the improvement of technology, people can pay to use advertisement blocking apps in which they can block or skip it immediately and keep them from being distracted by it. As a matter of fact, the advertisements must be censored in terms of its factual information by the government censorship team before being published to customers.
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- The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014 11
- Look at the two maps of Sunnyhills University campus in 1995 and today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Look at the two maps of Sunnyhills University campus in 1995 and today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- The chart show the different how three countries learn English in 2010 and 2015 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...sion-making. Regarding the solution of this problems, the censorship and limits on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, if, regarding, so, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46073298429 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15439703633 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659685863874 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2676790412 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22405504594 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835981266775 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437227551378 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140055773287 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272203615731 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.