The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
Nowadays, increasing number of people is one of the biggest problem for the humanity in the world. In my opinion, this rising is going to lead to dramatic issues such as food shortages and drinking water shortages while the world's resources are declining.
There are great deals of advantages at medical field in our modern life than ever before. In earlier periods, not only medical services could not respond to people's safe life, but also the rules of hygiene were not followed. That is why majority of people died cause of their diseases. And now, the development of these services and obeying the rules of hygiene are going to lead to rise of population, longevity of human beings.
On the other hand, as a result of this growth, it will be difficult to provide the population with food and drinking water such as some poorest people of India's overpopulation are starving. Also, the people of Africa are suffering from dehydration. The amount of drinking water is drying up because of global warming. In order to in some parts of Africa are causing a variety of controversies due to the lack of drinking water. It can also be said that the world's limited mineral resources and the various chemicals used for soil fertility can also have a major impact on human life.
In conclusion, overpopulation will be a major problem for basic food shortages and water supply.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82627118644 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62778490731 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563559322034 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6245729303 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.545454545 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134131590972 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050145410323 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464299016513 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859143110332 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447823740545 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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