Nowadays, it is easy to find any developments in many ways. Because of these developments many countries are getting more similliar to each other. People, thesedays, have no big troubles in buying the same products anywhere in the world. It is debateable that whether this development have a positive impact or negative impact on us. From now on, I would like to share my opinion why I think this is a positive development.
Firstly, becoming able to buy the same products anywhere means becoming easier to live away from difficulties. In the past, people used to have some trouble in getting balanced nutritions. For instance, it was very hard for some people to get some water or fish because of the lack of development of technology for transportation. These people have been suffered from this lack until we started to communicate actively.
Secondly, being able to buy the same products can make a lot of people feel united. Things have become easier to find their country's products in another country. These would make people feel more united than they used to be able to do. Also, this can also attract people from other countries, which can lead to development that comes from diversity. Some could say that this development can make many countries lose their speciality. However, it is unrelyable to think the possibility of losing a country's soul because of some products.
In conclusion, becoming able to buy the same product anywhere is definitely a positive development. People would become much easier to get balanced nutritions and to fe디 more united with countries where they are living in. We should make a lot of efforts to promote the development
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99642857143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76857133643 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507142857143 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.5838394 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7222222222 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448706482704 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132316877086 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753296831692 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28086262354 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554638338984 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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