It is commonly often to visit a museum paying no admission fee, while sometimes you have to pay a devastating fee to some others. My personal perspective is solely worth to pay a ticket for the entrance in a museum, no matter how much it costs.
It frequently appears to be a good idea to visit a museum that does not keep an entrance fee, but this can cause serious problems in the future museum operation. Museums which do not impose a ticket to their visitors are pretty often struggling to operate and be developed in a systematic way. They may attract many visitors every year but many times they are supported by government funding, which leads to excessive costs for taxable residents of that country. Consequently, they freely promote the culture but at the same time, they put extra costs on citizens for no reason.
Museums that apply a fee for admission to their visitors are more independent and sustainable without government’s financial support. These museums, although they cannot attract a large number of visitors, can be maintained by their own, having a decent quality of facilities for their eminent visitors and well-maintained exhibition areas. Furthermore, they can hold temporary exhibitions more often in order to attract other groups of visitors. Hence, an entrance fee is worthwhile for their own maintenance and development.
In conclusion, regardless of the fact that some believe that free entrance museums may result in higher taxes for the residents of their country, they should have an admission fee in order to remain sustainable, well-facilitated and developed.
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that that should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. 52
- We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in future?In this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of thei 67
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive development or a negative development? 54
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a systematic way" with adverb for "systematic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... struggling to operate and be developed in a systematic way. They may attract many visitors every y...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...e museums, although they cannot attract a large number of visitors, can be maintained by their ow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, may, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16030534351 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00064091982 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1509863707 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.909090909 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209496370089 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878504040021 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354873206902 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135342283664 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00540587629079 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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