Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Since people are able to buy products from all over the world nowadays, different countries have started to look alike. I personally think that overall this is a positive happening but if there would be no control or consideration, it can also have some destructive impacts on a society. In this essay I will talk about this issue’s pros and cons.
First of all, the main advantage of this issue for me is the opportunity to buy something from overseas when you do not have easy access to it. Due to modernity and time constraint, it is very useful that people are able to eliminate their needs within a click of a button. For instance, without the internet and the sake of overseas shipping, I could not be able to buy my favorite original cookbook from America. Therefore, It would be really difficult for me to develop my work ,only with using some untrustworthy resources online. Afterwards, with this facility, international brands can increase their sales rate and also, there will be a balance in living situations all over the world which I consume it as a good occurrence.
On the other hand, with international businesses taking over, local ones might start to fail simply because they do not have the strength to compete with their huge competitor. Also, this can affect local products as well. When people cease to buy their local products, especially the ones with cultural history, they will gradually disappear from the market. Therefore, we will be facing a serious destructive effects on our culture and the society is going to lose its uniqueness. Eventually we are going to lose our identity and become robots with no past.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that overseas shopping is partially a good development but I think the governments all over the world, should start advertising for the local businesses as well. I would also recommend funding them to grow and be able to become a part of this international trading.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87537091988 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78899234168 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551928783383 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7386780162 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.533333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206395040128 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705179425257 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434688269215 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135984907085 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438526199431 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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