Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?
The whole world is changing rapidly in every aspect, development , new technology, new invention but beside all these developments,it is also creating problem of illiteracy, over population, polution also. So, the problems that my homeland, will be facing in next ten years are change in climate and migration of labour market
To begain with, Nepal is small country with 3 crores citizens, where agricture ia the main source of income for the most of peoples.But now a days,people`s attraction towards the agricture is decreasing day by day due to the modernization of society. Due to this , people will be facing the problem of climate change in next some years. For example, now people are plotting all the agricultural land for housing, by this forest and open space will be destroyed and there will be climate change in the enviroment.
Secindly, People will be facing the problem of labour market in my country. People are migrating to others country due to lack of opportunity and facilities, this may cause the scarcity of skilled and unskilled workers in the market. For intense, people are going abroad to earn more money as in Nepal theg cannot earn same levwl of money in same sector .
As some solution for both problems are government and local adminiatration should allocate more budget awarness problem of climate change and maje peope awar for the problem that may cause my climate change. Government should bring strict rules in plotting the fertile land and give emohasis on agrictural sector and small and local business. Government should import high technology for agriculture and small business market and creat market foe them also government should provide subsidairy for this sector to attract the people.
To conclusion, Nepal can face problem on climate change and labour market in next ten years as i am concern. So, the gocernment and local admistration should bring strict policies and implement to overcome from this problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing rapidly in every aspect, development , new technology, new invention but besid...
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Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...y aspect, development , new technology, new invention but beside all these developments,it is...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ention but beside all these developments,it is also creating problem of illiteracy,...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...f illiteracy, over population, polution also. So, the problems that my homeland, wil...
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Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n climate and migration of labour market To begain with, Nepal is small country w...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the peoples') or simply say ''most peoples''.
Suggestion: most of the peoples; most peoples
...re ia the main source of income for the most of peoples.But now a days,people's attraction...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ource of income for the most of peoples.But now a days,people's attraction tow...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...e of income for the most of peoples.But now a days,people's attraction towards the ag...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... income for the most of peoples.But now a days,people's attraction towards the ag...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people&apos
...e for the most of peoples.But now a days,people's attraction towards the agricture is d...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he modernization of society. Due to this , people will be facing the problem of cl...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... labour market in my country. People are migrating to others country due to lack ...
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... earn same levwl of money in same sector . As some solution for both problems a...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t awarness problem of climate change and maje peope awar for the problem that may...
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Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and labour market in next ten years as i am concern. So, the gocernment and loca...
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Line 9, column 212, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...policies and implement to overcome from this problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.165625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79456657028 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4351731616 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.75 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238996800217 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106013119168 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970592658767 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148976450884 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596039903354 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing rapidly in every aspect, development , new technology, new invention but besid...
^^
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...y aspect, development , new technology, new invention but beside all these developments,it is...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ention but beside all these developments,it is also creating problem of illiteracy,...
^^^
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...f illiteracy, over population, polution also. So, the problems that my homeland, wil...
^^^^
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n climate and migration of labour market To begain with, Nepal is small country w...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the peoples') or simply say ''most peoples''.
Suggestion: most of the peoples; most peoples
...re ia the main source of income for the most of peoples.But now a days,people's attraction...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ource of income for the most of peoples.But now a days,people's attraction tow...
^^^
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...e of income for the most of peoples.But now a days,people's attraction towards the ag...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... income for the most of peoples.But now a days,people's attraction towards the ag...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people&apos
...e for the most of peoples.But now a days,people's attraction towards the agricture is d...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he modernization of society. Due to this , people will be facing the problem of cl...
^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... labour market in my country. People are migrating to others country due to lack ...
^^
Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... earn same levwl of money in same sector . As some solution for both problems a...
^^
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t awarness problem of climate change and maje peope awar for the problem that may...
^^
Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and labour market in next ten years as i am concern. So, the gocernment and loca...
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Line 9, column 212, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...policies and implement to overcome from this problems.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.165625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79456657028 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4351731616 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.75 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238996800217 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106013119168 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970592658767 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148976450884 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596039903354 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.