Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
People from different part of country want to migrate to urban areas for various opportunities. This lead to the problem of over population in developed cities. Traffic jam, pollution, unemployment are the major problem of overpopulation. In this essay, we discuss on the problem and solution of overpopulation.
In the begin, people migrate from rural to urban area to grab the opportunity and dreaming of better life. This may cause the serious problem of over population in city area. Traffic Jam, pollution and scarcity of job are the extreme causes of overcrowding. For example, the huge problem of traffic in road of urban area is awful and pollution is affecting global warming because of crowding. Similarly, finding good job is another challenge of urbanization.
However, we need to solve the mass problem from government level, because only public can not reduce crowding. Problems we are facing, only because of mal-distribution of development and facilities provided to the public. Some cities are over developed and some cities do not have basic infrastructure too. Such as, in Nepal all the facilities are focused only in capital city, Kathmandu. People need to visit Kathmandu to enjoy all types of facilities in one place, this led to the over crowd in Kathmandu. And people get addictive to urban area to enjoy the life. Meanwhile, government should enforce the law of equal distribution to all over the country, to reduce the mass in urban area. And in the same way, providing importance and subsidies to local business in rural area, which help to grow their earning also work effectively to reduce overcrowding.
In brief, people move to urban area seeking of opportunities and facilities. So, government should make reduce mal-distribution and provide equal priority in every sector of country, this led to the reduction of over crowd.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...of country, this led to the reduction of over crowd.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, as for, for example, in brief, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1821192053 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99717167087 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496688741722 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0386639124 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3684210526 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22566253903 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693631384705 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440979484965 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136059981363 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269251307814 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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