some people say that best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. others, however, say that this would have little effect in public health and that other measures are required.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Being healthy is always one of the important part of quality living and people follow varieties of procedures to stay fit and healthy. Many experts claim that, soaring sports facilities in society can improve public health, whereas, other argues that, there are many others creative way to improve public health. This essay will examine some arguments for and against on both views.
To begin with, we cannot deny that playing different kinds of sports can be beneficial to every people. For examples, different health related organization's surveys has revealed that, sports help to keep fit and healthy to every individuals, hence, every school has also added extra classes for sports for their children. Similarly, sports can be interesting subject to attract people and they cannot feel bored as well. So, adding different kinds of physical sports facilities can contribute to improve people health.
Secondly, as some people argue, only improving in sports cannot be effective in society. There are many people in our society, who does not love playing. At the same time, especially girls and women are unable to join such types of physical sports due to engage in household and societal restriction. Moreover, almost sports academy was chargeable, due to lack of enough money many poor people cannot join such sports being interested. Indeed, society must think more effective way to improve the situation of public health. Such as, unchangeable sports class and yoga classes targeting to household and girls, different health champion, which provide knowledge of healthy dietary and balanced nutrition food. Furthermore, spread importance of indoor exercise and value of organic homemade food rather than packaging food. This all suggestions can be helpful to improve public health beyond public physical fitness center.
In conclusion, health is precious wealth for every individuals, hence, society must start giving emphasis on other facilities also, despite sports. Sound health is the right of every people and concern authority must target every level of people in society to facilitate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40548780488 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4922824812 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2432052766 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.294117647 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27256217944 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943874112464 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801701999611 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17923767689 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670697399655 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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