As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what are the causes and what are the effects on both individuals and society as a whole.
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Compared to the distant past, family structures in modern society have undergone major alterations as people have a tendency to live individually or in a smaller family unit. This essay will shed light on the primary causes of this growing phenomenon and simultaneously analyze the negative effects it has on individuals themselves as well as society as a whole.
The increase in the number of people pursuing an individualistic lifestyle could be put down to their craving for employment. In some parts of the world, it is not unusual nowadays for villagers to migrate to urban areas in search of job chances and then settle down there. Whereas, their parents are reluctant to leave their homeland partly because they are used to living in the countryside, or they do not want to become their children’s burden. This explains the separation of children, parents, and grandparents, leading to the rise in nuclear families. In addition, it is the massive workload in the era of industrialization that has changed people’s attitudes toward marriage life. Research has shown that the busier and more successful women are, the less likely they are to get married, which they consider being a waste of time. Instead, they devote themselves to developing their own career and enjoy their single status. The generation gap could also be the major cause of this as people living in different periods of time tend to have different lifestyles and mindsets; hence, living in a detached manner appears to be an optimal choice to avoid family conflicts, especially between in-law relationships.
The changes in family sizes and pursuit of privacy may have counter effects not only on individuals themselves but also on the overall development of an economy. Lack of social interaction possibly affects employees’ intimate relationships and collaboration skills, which are believed to be indispensable parts of the modern working environment. Moreover, it also puts the elderly’s safety in jeopardy due to insufficient care and protection, especially in undeveloped nations where social protection centers are not common. On top of that, this new lifestyle is likely to decrease marriage and fertility rates, contributing to the aging population in some countries namely Japan, Italy, and Finland. As a result, their general progressions are constrained.
Everything said and done, increasing demands for life quality, hectic schedules, and generation discrepancies are to blame for this secluded way of living. I, personally, affirm that this mainstream is detrimental to our social interaction in particular as well as society in general.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, as to, in addition, in general, in particular, as a result, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31428571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06881025348 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.123222073 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.5 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175637660936 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518887830395 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537338349316 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105276943914 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710952417339 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 78.4519038076 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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