It can be observed that many people become workaholic and they spend more time at work place. As a result, they are not only earning good wegs, but also enhance the economy of nation. However, it often brings optimistic consequences for societies. I confidently agree with the statement and my stance is justified further.
There are many negative outcomes for working longer hours. Firstly, in many countries they do not provide any work limit and they usually spend half of a time in offices. Thus, they create a wall between their work office and family and often feel isolation. Secondly, spending more time in work creates anxiety. Consequently, they may be less concentrated in their tasks and production of work may be decreased.
Furthermore, extended work schedules adversely affect the health. Researchers proved that, employees who work for several hours are often suffer from metaly diseases and easily get tired. Moreover, spending too much time on work may mitigate their hobbies and leisure times. Thus, they follow monotonous schedules for working and easily get bored.
However, no doubt, increasing hours of work might help to enhance economy of nations. For example, number of China's employees work more than other countries employees, hence they have the highest production in all manufacturing units and the country earn more profits. Overtime at workplace means more contribution, and it is not only uplifts companies economy, but also improves nations economy.
To conclude, although over working may surge economy level, my arguments proved that more indulgence at work place might have negative consequences, such as less time spend with family and hobbies and face some health problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35661764706 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63126158366 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9653056044 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7058823529 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41176470588 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266100247816 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876937129418 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662086946136 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153370545487 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359875562318 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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