Gaining education has become increasing for couple of decades. Many students love to do their studies from overseas and it can be proved that students exchange would be benefitial for them. I think, studying with students with various culture brings more fruitfulness rather than disadvantageous. Both the merits and demerits are discussed further.
Discussing the positive accepts of international education, the biggest advantage is that students have great opportunities to learn different cultures and languages. It is not only enhance their skills, but also improves their knowledge towards other cultures. Moreover, pupils have better chances to achieve good jobs. As, International students have various experience gained while living in foreign countries and most of them are extraordinary in their field.
Furthermore, at the personal level of development, students achieve self-confidence and have a abilities to tackle any hard situation. Because, living in other nations for studying purpose need to leave their native place as well as family and it teaches how to earn, how to accommodate and many more. It enhance their abilities to survive and also it builts confidence.
However, there are some disadvantageous too, some students may face culture shock. When they are beginning their career in other nations they have difficulties with food, language and new rules and regulations, because they never used to follow their culture. In addition, the students have to adjust and compromise with the habits. Because they never do anything with their self. These problems are for only fort short period, after that they easily overcome to the situation.
To conclude, although students might feel culture shock and they need to compromise, they enhance their skills and learn new experiences and languages. Hence, i believe, advantages are far from the disadvantageous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: a ability; abilities
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Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... adjust and compromise with the habits. Because they never do anything with their self....
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58680555556 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93560115605 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5399231514 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3888888889 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150920192108 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477478431236 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554420326475 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844241791023 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620492631092 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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