Country should try to produce all the food for the population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
By focusing on the progress of national economy, nowadays, many governments believe that providing more food to their citizens and reducing as much the amount of imported food from other countries as possible are great selections. For me, I totally agree with the sufficient of these national food and products.
When it comes to good importations, there are number of expenditures relating to tax, transportation, food conservation and so on costing a large amount of money in the national budgets. Instead, the governments should develop and focus more on food growth locally or within the countries. For example, more farmlands are grown up and irrigated in specific localities, so that every citizen around that place can buy foodstuffs easily and directly from these farms or the local groceries without paying any fees of moving or conserving food. Moreover, the incomes of those farm owners can also contribute remarkably to the higher revenue of total national market value of these countries. Therefore, this priority can invariably benefit to the total turnover of the national finance as well as the percentage of these country’s gross domestic product.
For the majority of people approving this mentioned statement, mostly agree with another advantage that could be brought up to the countries is that it can minimize the rate of unemployment in these nations as well as create more job for them. Especially, when talking about agricultural fields, though, with the technological promotions in many other fields, it still plays an important role in yielding food’s product to human being and definitely there are still many available jobs and positions that only human can do such as the farmer, the agricultural scientist, the inspector and the manager. As a result, without the encouragement and promotion from the governments and those endeavor people doing farming jobs, the agriculture itself cannot develop comprehensively, so that having effects on these national economic growth.
Overall, not only agricultural countries but also other developing and developed countries are trying to provide sufficiently and keep the national food consumption in safe zone. In my opinion, this action can benefit for both the growth of the national economy and people living in that country.
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 84
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y and people living in that country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, such as, talking about, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38674033149 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90871254175 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560773480663 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.3833912166 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.5 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197765737381 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810874067895 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05689048532 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14264993234 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056186911341 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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